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    Ice queen

          9
    Good to see you're back and posting (and looking better than ever of course!). I think you could have done something a bit more with this pose, it doesn't really say much to me, and I'm not crazy about the cropped wrist, but very nice tones.

    Num#2

          5
    I think it is a great idea, but the background is distracting. It needs to be a very clean flat white in order to contrast with the fabric. Also the lighting is a bit flat, maybe some stronger side lighting to create more shadow in the fabric? What sort of fabric is it, cotton, plastic?

    Untitled

          16
    This is where weddings and fashion meet, you should be proud of this. Nice lighting to get good separation between the dress and the dark ground. Good work with the sky exposure, and nice shadows on the chest and top of legs. Very well done.

    Surf at Nielsen

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    I shot this after I noticed that a famous Australian photographer had

    produced a very nice work near where I live. Its very rare that 6ft

    or bigger surf enters the harbour and makes a nice shot with the city

    in the background. I think I might go down again tomorrow and try to

    get the wave more towards the right of the frame and less cluttered

    without the boat in the background.

  1. This is the bar just next to the Opera House which on a balmy warm

    Friday night attracts a significant number of revellers. I thought it

    would be good to try and caputre the movement of the people

    socialising with the stillness of the water and bridge in the

    background, but even over a 30 sec exposure, people don't move much

    while drinking...

    Luna Park

          1

    I overexposed the highlights of this shot in order to bring up the

    reflections on the water, and I was surprised how saturated they

    become with the long exposure times.

    Joy of Childhood

          4

    This is one of those little surprises you get when you go through the

    CF card at the end of a shoot. I had intended a nice sharp image.

    Contributing factors must have been slow shutter speed, use of fill

    flash, I might have panned as well. I think it conveys the frenetic

    pace of play these kids were in, do you agree?

  2. This is a product shot of sorts, just not shot in a studio. After

    adjusting contrast and exposure, and a quick crop, this has become

    the customer's hero shot to email to potential customers. It was a

    very bright day and trying to get both the dark blue hull and white

    topsides to hold detail was much harder than I had thought. I blew a

    lot of highlights because in the bright sun its not possible to

    actually see the LCD histogram, even with your hand shielding it.

  3. The most iconic lifesaving devices in Australia are the reel and

    surfboat. This was the last wave of an 8ft set, and barrelling down

    the face, the sweep slewed the boat and they were in trouble from

    then on. Expecially once he lost their rudder with the jetski patrol

    looking on with interest. This was the peak of the action, boat

    filled with water, and the sweep looking like he's about to get hit

    on the head...

    Surfboat runner

          1

    After you've raced 10 other teams from the shore out around a can

    half a mile out and back again in the surf, someone's gotta get out

    and run up the beach to the finish line.

  4. Had a shoot earlier today for a promotion and this turned out to be

    the client's hero shot for the digital files we've showed them so

    far. The customer thinks that potential boat owners will criticise

    the amount of spray at the sides, but I think it adds to the feeling

    of horsepower.

  5. Trying to figure out which side to shoot yachts from only gives you a

    few choices. From in front gets a good view of the hull, but if

    downwind you see no people, and upwind you only see those on the

    rail. From the stern you see the human factor, but it can get a bit

    monotonous so I thought I'd try a waterline shot under the boom. Any

    good?

  6. this is my first series of black and white landscapes, trying to

    figure out what works and what needs colour to get some 'wow' factor.

    I think B&W needs stronger simple lines, and the colour in this was

    only subtle anyway with the grays and whiteness of the snow.

  7. This was one of my images from my last NYC visit, and tries to convey

    how an outsider feels each time they go there. The density of

    building has a striking impact on travellers and is perhaps what

    you're in awe of each time you first start wandering around town,

    being down the bottom of canyons, especially around sunset.

  8. I took this bobbing around on a boat with the 20d at ISO 1600 at

    1/40th, using my 50mm f1.4 at f1.6. I didn't want to shoot wide open

    because the colours wash out each click up to about f2.8, but

    considering how many unsteady shots I got I should have gone f1.4 and

    ISO 3200 and maybe bought some noise reduction software.

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