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    Gerbera

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    I would have prefered more sharpeness on the bottom left (and right) and on the top center.

     

    Maybe a better symmetry would have made it more powerful?

     

    Great image the same.

    In the city

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    But quite pleasant. Il like the emotion it lets see. The color is pretty. I would have liked a bit more sharpness...

     

    Cordially,

     

    Sébastien Pepinster

  1. Something I could say for almost all you B&W pics: The idea of the subject is good but they are a bit contrastless... Do you see what I mean? (a bit more light and dark grey that Black and White...) Is your developper at 20°C??? But good images as well...
  2. Il love your B&W photos. They make me remember the great times of Timelife Magazine. They are full of life and fix just the present moment. I'm trying to make such pictures but they are not developped yet. I hope they will be as good as yours. Go on doing such a good job. Congratulations David, congratulations.
  3. However the model is quite pretty, the shape given to her body by the pose taken is not really aestetic. Try to focus yourself on the beauty of the picture and not of the model's beauty. That's a comment I should post for almost all of you pictures.
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