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tony bell

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    Pelicans

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    For those obviously still oblivious:

     

     

    Jeroen Akershoek, September 26, 2006; 04:06 P.M.

    Hi Jim

     

    Great photo. Not that it matters, but this is a composition of two photos right?

     

    Jim Hoffmanphoto.net patron, September 26, 2006; 05:35 P.M.

     

    Thanks,Jeroen!Yes,you're right! Greetings,Jim

    Ellen

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    I disagree with most of the comments left on this. I think it is outstanding, and I REALLY dislike the version suggested above. One thing that might make people "see" what I see is to put a wide black frame around it. The gray background really hurts this one. Super work, and LOVE her eyes!
  1. There are a lot of issues in this shot. First I don't care for all the shadow in the foreground with some of the people in it and some not. The building feels crooked due to the angle from which you took the shot. The building on the right side is very distracting, particularly the down spout. I would shoot this again standing in the area of the down spout and shoot just the main frontal portion of the building, capturing more archetectural detail and less sky.

    Spotlight

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    The singer is positioned far too low in the frame in my opinion. You might try cropping off the right side to just behind his head (then the yellowish beam coming from the top of his head leaves near the corner of the frame) and cropping down from the top to exclude the bright blue screen on teh left edge (then the other yellow beam emanating from his hands leaves through the corner of the frame. This would make it a far more interesting photograph for me.
  2. Beautiful horse, and yes we should all be this content. Very sharp image and well timed. I wonder how it would look if you cropped the right side over to where you would just catch the bottom corner of the roof, excluding the camera or light or whatever it is on the roof? And maybe down from the top to cut out the balcony? It may center the fence post too much but it's hard to tell without actually trying it. Anyway, very nice work!
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