gone nomad

July 30, 2004

Rendiering he background more out of focus would have helped. As would bringing the nearer bushes into focus.

July 30, 2004

I find the dolor a little to cold and blue.

July 30, 2004

I think this would work better as a horizontal. You could crop the botom half of the image.

July 27, 2004

Well done image. Colours are nice. Horizon is straight. Composition is good. Looks like there are a few contrails in the sky; however, there's nothing you can do about that.

July 27, 2004

This image is a bit to busy for my eyes. What is the subject here? Boats on th beach? The dock?

July 27, 2004

This is an example of when a symetrical image can work. Good job using the path to guide my eyes into the image.

July 27, 2004

Hard to decide wether this is an image of a cloudy sky over a an irrigation ditch vice-versa. YOu can emphasize your subject by giving it more print area. Here the sky has an equal area to the ditch. Thus, my eye is uncertain wether the ditch or the sky is the subject you intended. Thus, you should move your horizon up or down to emphasize the subject you intended.

July 27, 2004

An interesting perspective. Perhaps it would have been a bit better if the shore was diagonal across the picture.

July 26, 2004

The colors just seem a little off.

July 26, 2004

I really don't care for the border.

July 25, 2004

Looks really good. Red filter?

July 25, 2004

The sky does nothing for this image. Thus, less sky and more sidewalk. Tipping the camera down would have helped here.

July 25, 2004

The image is split too much in half for my taste. Perhaps a bit more water and a bit less sky.

July 19, 2004

Good job keeping detail in the snow. This is dificult for many people.

July 19, 2004

I would have liked to see a bit more detail in the sunlit trees. Perhaps a 1/2 stop less exposure would have done this. This would have left some detail in the traks and gravel too.

July 18, 2004

This appears to have been a night exposure. Furthermore, I realize that a longer exposure would have resulted in star trails; however, I feel that this is a bit to dark.

July 18, 2004

I saw an earlier version of this that I liked better.

July 18, 2004

I see two parts fighting for dominance. My guess is that you intended for the waterfall to be the subject; hoever, the rocks in the forground are so large that they compete with the waterfall.

July 18, 2004

Have you thought of submitting this to a camping magazine?

July 18, 2004

I realize that this is a difficult image. Lots of contrast here. You have good shadow detail; however, the highlights are overexposed. Perhaps 1/3 to 2/3 of a stop less exposure would have been better. The the sand would have had some detail. This still would have worked to tell a story as the lady on the left would be just fine as a silhouete.

July 17, 2004

The sky is uninteresting. You should have excluded it.

July 17, 2004

I don't care for how the flagpole splits the image in two.

July 17, 2004

The mtns on the left look a little washed out.

July 17, 2004

Nice job

July 17, 2004

I'm not sure I like this. Looks contrived

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