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jim_leisy

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  1. I like this portrait. Good pose. But the story for me is about the guitar player not the flowers. They are a lovely detail in his shirt, but coloring the rose confuses what story you want me to think about.

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    The tones are much better on my home computer. Which improves the aesthetics. You've got a much stronger image than I realized. In my opinion, you could eliminate the person in the left hand corner. I would experiment with a tighter cropping along the bottom and left side of the image.
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