magumi

June 29, 2003

A slightly too tight crop for my taste. The picture could have been improved by the use of a divided ND filter to darken the skies.

June 29, 2003

Well composed. I like the lively reds and subdued greens.

June 29, 2003

Nice street scene, but a little bit cluttered, I think.

June 29, 2003

Great light, classical composition.

June 29, 2003

Very good.

June 15, 2003

Excellent. Great composition, very clever use of low shutter speed. A little burning of the overexposed window would help the tonal balance and I would prefer a tighter crop of the table to emphasize the eye contact attempt of the child looking at the grandfather, but these are just minor points.

June 15, 2003

A true achievement. This is a photograph that I will remember.

June 15, 2003

Interesting idea. Seven for originality.

June 14, 2003

Great portrait with a mood. I think it could be even more improved by shooting with a longer lens, and by getting rid of the shoulder stip and necklace to emphasize the neckline.

June 14, 2003

Great lighting, pose and model. On the other hand, I think that the crop is too tight. In my opinion the picture would work better it the ear tip or the eyebrow of the model did not touch the edges.

April 6, 2003

Excellent. Great lighting, the texture of the wall balances the composition, the space left out above the painting makes an interesting composition. However, to make this a truly great picture, I would need to convey some kind of message or story, which is why I do not given 7's.

April 6, 2003

Great light and colours. I think the picture could have been improved, if had stepped a little bit closer and simplified the composition. The division of the picture in half destroys much of the impact.

April 6, 2003

Classical use of colour and shape in the best sense. However, for me the composition does not keep the eye inside the picture.

April 6, 2003

I think that the branches of the tree distract the attention from the main subject. On the other hand, the light is very interesting, even though personally I would opt for a little bit more contrast.