william_lawless

A decent photo becomes a piece of art. Good job of selecting the colors and other effects. The results convey the emotion.

 

Bill

He is having a good time! Good capture of the moment. Good DOF

Most paddlers are not that colorful......... .

Good Treatment. A fine Arts Candidate. I could see this for many days.

No more than Salvador Dali! Good Work. Look at the MOCA site.

** Museum Of Computer Art **

I really like the technique. Your results are very in tune with making photos and grahics produce a diffrent item.

Lighting and pose work together very well. A celebration of form. The skin tone looks dark, but viewing the larger image it is part of the overall effect.

Good work.

I like this image for its creativity. Keep working on this theme. You are probably a few shots away from a few really great images. A small amount of post processing would be to clean the field so that nothing but the central image catches the eye,

 

Bill

I like the photograph... the stance of the lady and the horse show a lot of strength. the light is such that the models are defined to the best advantage. Depth of field allows for seeing the full situation. Ready to go for a ride.

 

Bill

Very natural pose, not contrived. The result is instant acceptace of the scene. So there are exposure problems, but that is how we learn

 

Bill .

All is well on the composition and pose. I think that the background should be shade lighter than the hair. Not very much. Maybe a little post processing

 

Bill

A beautiful photo. 45 years from now it will still be beautiiful to compare to your grand babies. Been there done that.

Some special bulletin board. This image with its message could be fine art. Sure is arresting. My compliments on the work.

 

Bill

Very good! First impression is classic. With the comments tried and rejected or kept this is one of the best.

 

Bill L

Use a hall tree with a coat and anything else you want.A masking tape "X" on the floor at that spot. Camera on a tripod. Camera set manual focus. Check the distance as correct and remove the "stand in". Start the delayed shutter release and put you where the "stand in" was. School and church group shops setup that way to avoid the refocusing every 10 miniutes

 

Bill

Over fifty years ago I could make the boring machine create metal shavings like this. They do make an interesting abstraction. I caught hell from the foreman because they are sharp as knives.

The picture is interesting to view. It is a bit abstract, that only makes it better. The foreground is too dark, I would remove the lower third and get equal amount of sky at the top. Long exposures are problematic unless you have lot of experience with the film and how it processes. Good job!

A really good portrait. The dog even seems interested in the process. Sometimes the simplest solution is the best solution. The flag is a positive detail and the subject(s) are in correct placement

As a portrait the face is sharp and the makeup done well. I think a small modeling light would give you depth in the face. The hand is foreshorten so you need less of it or a longer lense. Maybe just the tips? That would leave you with a standard focal point

Very creative!Color adds a lot to the concept. Where in the process did you decide to use the super impose? In any case it works very well.

Very attractive. I find it diifficult to get the same results for these work flow steps on subsequent images. Very creative in many ways. Near and far objects have equal weight.

Yes! Also very good. Simple subject that turns attractive

Choice of place, pose, and color are good. The profile view of the face seems wrong. Turn the face about 45 degrees and you have a better picture.

This image is well composed and color is reasonable. The face area is too dark for a portrait. Photoshop is capable of bringing out the left eye area. Keep working at this image.

Really a good transcription. I assume you are the artist. The underside of the right arm is darker than necessary. Good view, and model placement.

At least it is truly abstract. Not some closeup out of context. The picture could have more contrast. Since abstract is really judged byy the abserver I would keep on trying and compoaring the results until I could see the results very often without being bored.