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strange artifacts in the colours on the face. Good idea but levels in PS looks wrong
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skin tones not well controlled in lighting -
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strange juxtoposition with the modern background -
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all of these portraits of this girl are fine, but they rely on exotic backgrounds to be interesting. That's not what portraits are generally about. Closer poses and more interesting angles would be better
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good character portrait. I'd either cut her off at the knee, or really include her feet. halfway looks a little odd
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nice enough portrait but the strong red hue is rather bizarre and off-putting
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eye contact and no date would be better. promising subject -
interesting pose, terrible background -
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nice light. I think it looks better with the carpet at the bottom cropped out. -
lovely to see a model who isn't a stickinsect! -
Once again you've taken a good scene and spoilt it with a poorly stuck on sky. A small problem is the rather clumsy join between sky and horizon. A larger problem is that the sky is out of proportion to the scene. Quite often your shots are superficially attractive, but when you look closer they aren't as good as the parts that make them. You do take good landscapes though, so I'd personally prefer rather straighter shots and less use of the Photoshop.
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pub nicely done but oversharpened. The sky looks incredibly artificial. I assume you've cut out and added it. -
good but rather stilted pose
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would prefer a slight reflector on the inside of the breast to show the rounded shape. otherwise very good -
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confused composition. need to use some of the lines to lead your eye into the picture- which needs to have a focal point and a sky that isn't burnt out -
might try a longer portrait lens as baby has gone crosseyed. This gives it a strange appearance
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