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denisbergeron

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  1. Walking witht the monopod on hip !

    Technics and critique for improuvement are welcome.

    I know that the background it's a little bit empty and the forehead isreally burn.

    I use the Canon 500mm f4 IS with is off, all picture made with IS areblurry.

     

    Necklace

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    Overall it's a nice picture, technically, this picture is good.

     

    Three problems :

    1) The lines in the background are distracting.

     

    2) I think it will be better if we don't see the hands whom cut the lines of the body and attracts more attention than the Necklace.

     

    3)It will be better also if we can see more of the necklace around the neck (the hair have to be attached).

  2. Le boisé du parc Thomas Chapais après la dernière neige du moisd'avril 2006.

    The Thomas-Chapais' park after the last snow of April 2006.

    Canon 5d.

    Sigma 12-24mm @ 12mm.

    SVP comparer à la précédente.

    PLEASE compare with the other one preceding.

    Untitled

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    Le boisé du parc Thomas Chapais après la dernière neige du moisd'avril 2006.

    The Thomas-Chapais' park after the last snow of April 2006.

    Canon 5d

    Zenitar 16mm

    SVP comparer à la suivante

    PLEASE compare with the other one following.

  3. I forget my 5d on manuel at f11 with 1/200 at iso100 in a kitchen for

    a rapid snapshoot with only one bulb lamp !

    This is my wife after some work on the black raw file !

     

    I find the result ... interresting !

    Fausse Alarme

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    Mon premier essai d'une vrai photo en 12mm !

    My first test of true a photography in 12mm!

    Critiquez l'angle, la méthode, et le reste SVP.

    Please Critique angle, technic, and everything else!

    Untitled

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    Centre de la Nature de Laval !

    Deux cygnes et leurs r馬exions

    Laval Nature center

    Swans of time

    Two swans and their reflexions

     

  4. It's my first cityscape and my first real photo with my new camera!I will love to receive critique to improuve my work.

    I know thatthe white clock-tower on the rigth was a little overexposed on thisreduced size, but on the real picture the detail are very apparent.

    Thank You

    Wild Beast

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    Too much DOF. The cage in the Backgroud takin all the attention; my eye forget the firt plan of this picture. If you blur the background the animal take all the attention.

    Nice work

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