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flaviosganzerla

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    Untitled

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    Rating 2/3 this picture is almost unbelievable... Very good composition and contrast. I can´t tell how to improve this picture, I wish I have done it myself. Maybe a crop on the wall at right... I can see this image a very long time without feel bored!

     

    Sorry about my (not good) English!

  1. The things I don't like here are the dark sky at the top and his black pants because we see no detail. I (don't know for sure but) think if it had +0,3 or +0,7 exposition could resolve all these "problems". Until now I think this is the best photo of skateboard from you.
  2. I think the light here is the best element of this photo. I almost always like to see more of the space where he is going to land. His blue t shirt made the contrast, but I don't know if it would be better with another color here. I also would like to see a little more of the obstacle at the left from where he came. Hope it makes sense for you.
  3. I would like to see the skateboarder on the "apice" of the ollie (where the front foot is lower than the back foot). This way it will bring more of the trick he is doing. Are you a skateboarder? If you are not I think this comment will only take your time.

    A Beach Boy

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    I am not the most indicated to give you some comments but I really liked this photo. I have not rated you better because I saw some of this kind of picture many times - but I still like them. For me if you could be more far from the boy it will be much better and if the boy were a little to th left because the "third rule". But is only my comment and I am still learning! Sorry about the bad english here!

     

    Weather

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    I like this picture but i think it could be better if were a little more ground here. And there is a dark area in the upper left of the image that i don't know if is the sky or not.
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