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ddob

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    Erin

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    The crop is ok. I think the model needs to be seperated from the background a little. I like the pose but the eye seems a little lifeless.
  1. Good portrait that needs some fine tuning. I would have used a larger apeture in order to blur the background which doesn`t add anything to the picture. A little more attention to cropping would help, you cut off the models left shoulder. The model looking off camera is ok but the eyes need a little light to give them life. A different angle maybe so that the horizon doesn`t bisect her head might work. Keep shooting.

    White Stork

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    Interesting shot. It looks like the bird is taking a bow. Good light & nice contrast between bird & background. I wish maybe you could get one of his eyes more in the picture.
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