john_paskey
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Good work. I think the lights actually take away from the composition though, sort of "confusing" the main subject of St. Mark's. A little perspective fixing to straighten out the top towers would make the photo a little better also. A little lower and you could have also included the tetrarchs but that is simply opinion. I do like the diffusing effect.
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Any comments or critiques appreciated.
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Any comments or critiques appreciated.
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Any comments or critiques appreciated.
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Any comments or critiques appreciated.
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Good portrait shot - The first thing I saw were the eyes which is what you want. The blue background really works well and the "working feet" adds another good element. I don't particularly think the composition is excellent but I probably would have done worse myself. Overall excellent portrait.
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Any comments or critiques appreciated.
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First off, a question. Have you ever met a homeless person who said
they could not accept that much money? ...and it wasn't much by
western standards. Probably the most prominent phrase I have ever
heard in my travels. Also a tribute to the integrity I found in the
peolple of Morocco. Second, I think I'm getting a little better at
the color and sharpness when downloading to the sight. Let me know
along with any other comments or ratings. I know that some will not
like the bag but that is part of the memory. Thanks.
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Still at it, I see, Ken. Great lighting and composition. I also like the framing.
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Any critiques, ratings, suggestions or whatever appreciated. Thanks.
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Situation of circumstance. I do know that most photo's work better when the figure is facing "into the photo" rather than out of the photo but I thought this worked fairly well with the lamp leading into the figure. Thus the title "Followed". As for the shadow, it is there, on the ground, and I did not want to fake it and photoshop the shadow on the wall so I leave the photo as is. Think outside the box and for me all these "rules" are there to break. Thank you for the critique. Very appreciated and hope to see more from you. I can only learn from them. JP
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Comments or ratings appreciated. Any advice on how to make the
photos sharper or more saturated on this sight would also help too.
Thanks.
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Really good composition. I find myself asking how it would look with a little less foreground though. Other than that I can't see any other "questions. Great tones and shades. Very original shot of Death Valley.
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Great color, composition and originality. I think the photo would be closer to a 7/7 if the branch was a little sharper though. Other than that it is just about perfect.
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Great composition and color. I'm not too crazy about the framing but just my opinion and personal taste. Great view and the composition, with the inclusion of the table and chair really adds alot to the photo, bringing the viewer into it with the addition of the "human" element. Very good. I originally gave the photo a 5 for aesthetics but looking at it again, even though it`s not the sharpest and color could probably be better, I have to give it a 7 for composition.
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Really good eye. Great composition and colors. Just like the above comments, a B/W colored looking photo.
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Lighting and exposure are perfect. Great photo.
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Very well done. Personally, I don`t think more human presence would make the photo any better. Great composition and color desaturation. Really good color on the train also, making it very "dramatic" against the black and white.
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Ahhh...Kerry Park. Great shot.
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His beard has gotten only longer.
His bling more extravagant...
http://www.pbase.com/happypoppeye/image/122118806
Great shot.
John