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rohit___perpetual_chonking

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    Female Portrait

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    Some observations:-

     

    Strong sunlight is making eyes look dark, also her right side of face is also a bit darker than her left. A reflector would have set it right, unless you intended it that way.

    I think you could have done better with the background as well by making the model stand at a place where the water appears more uniformly rather than the grass.

    What is it on the top of her head, the small white spec? It looks a bit odd to me.

  1. I looked at the picture several times during the week trying to appreciate its feel but still it remains dull and boring. The only thing I appreciate is the similarity of the structures but that may be because of the architects running out of imagination rather than how the photo fills the frame.

     

    I thing the editors ran out of imagination on selecting the POW.

  2. The photo does convey in a simple yet strong way the message of a city turning into a "concreate jungle" and a resident feeling like a small cocoon surrounded by these sky scrapers.

     

    However I am not sure if it does anything to cheers us up in terms of originality or asthetics or it adds a new dimension to the way the mood of a city/megapolis can be captured.

     

    A simple photo of a Bombay slum thriving by the side of a skyscraper would convey more meaning.

     

    The editors have given a strong emphasis on the grain of the photo as a deciding factor but to me it fails to impress.

     

    Regards

    Rohit

     

     

     

     

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