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kool kat

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    White River falls

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    My first submission for critique. I have often debated in my mind

    where this photo should be cropped. If I were to get this

    enlarged right now, I would probably bring the top down to just

    above the highest tree on the right side of the photo (to help with

    the closed in atmosphere), and leave the bottom and sides

    where they are. But I think the photo could be helped in a way by

    bringing the bottom side up to just below where the rock in the

    foreground hits the water. The disadvantage of this would be

    that the unique foam swirls at the bottom left would be lost. If

    you would like, let me know what you think about the cropping

    and and the photograph as a whole. Thanks!

    Zion N.P.

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    Very nice. If I had to criticize, Id second the dark top right corner is a little distracting, and also I think the bottom left would benefit if the branches were not there.
  1. Michael Alexander -

     

    Your comment rings with ignorance and poor humor.

     

    The Senior Thesis in question was a project that my High School made all seniors complete, in place of taking final exams. I choose to have my Senior Thesis involve photography. All of the photos in this folder are black and white because our darkroom was only black and white capable. As you might or might not know, developing and exposing color photograph's requires more complex and expensive equipment than is needed for black and white work. I think you would be hard pressed to find many High Schools with color capable darkrooms. I worked on my project by myself, and that was what was available to me.

     

    p.s. If you would have taken the time to look at some of my other folders, you would have seen color photographs. By your reasoning, I must have taken those photographs my freshman year.

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