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robin v. stacey

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    erin 9 bw

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    Great shot; slightly out of focus on the eyes though, and the shadows under her arm are a little harsh - that could be fixed in the (digital) darkroom though.

    ag III

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    Beautiful model, and almost there for a great shot too. I'm not sure about the exposure though - it's halfway between overexposed and a true high key shot. There's either not enough detail in the skin tones, or too much for a high key, depending on your point of view. It might be the drop in resolution on the jpg, but the eyes don't quite look sharply focussed either; with eye colour like hers, 100% pin sharpness is needed.

     

    Great pose, great composition, nearly there.

    Togetherness

          5

    Taken today, cropped, and unsharp masked in Photoshop. More of the

    shots from the Butterfly House in Sheffield to come as I work through

    them.

     

    I know it's slightly soft - hand held a 300mm lens at 1/125 isn't

    pretty. Full credit to the 300D for doing what it did though.

     

    Feedback welcome!

  1. The slightly off centre composition works very well. No problems with colour or sharpness either. A well chosen rose, too. Well done! Only one minor criticism - the dark bottom left corner detracts. Lighten it or lose it and you'll have a more balanced shot.

     

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