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magnus_nystedt

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    CountrySide

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    Agree that the frame doesn't do anything for the photo. Also slightly overexposed at the middle top, where the sun shines through the leaves. Tricky situation to meter right though. Composition is good, and I love the colors.

    Untitled

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    I agree Kevin. It looks like just another snapshot and there is really nothing there for the casual observer to get caught by, not in terms of composition, color or anything. Is there a reason why so much of the books in the background are included? Why not focus more on the guy (change composition)? And yes, the color could be better. This is the case of the very "anonymous" photo where you just don't really know what to say about it, and I think that's why you haven't got any comments.

    Untitled

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    Seems a bit blurry - might be the scan, or the original (used a tripod?). Would be good to have something interesting added to the frame, a couple walking on the beach, a bird flying, a boat or something. As it is, it is a nice shot, but just too plain.
  1. There is something really nice here... but I think the trees in the background look plain and boring and take away from the foreground. Not sure what could have been done differently, perhaps focusing more on the shapes and colors in the stream.

    Untitled

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    I'm probably showing my ignorance here, but didn't you use a digital camera? So how come the film is tmax? :-) The shot needs to be brighter and with more contrast. Perhaps by moving some you could have made the background a bit simpler (for example by avoiding the tree to the left). Also the red is a bit distracting and kind of out of place, and it took me a while to figure out what it was :-)

    My window's sight

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    Not sure what to make of it... there are things in the trees (buildings?) that you cannot really make out, and so they are really distracting. The color of the sky is nice, as is the moon, but the foreground adds nothing. There needs to be either more focus on the foreground, or less foreground.
  2. Middle size pic is only 600 wide, so I don't see that as a problem. Lovely pic, perhaps a bit cropping or zooming in on the boy (?) would do it good. Also the silhoutte gets a bit lost with the land (rocks?) behind him, a step to the right would perhaps have helped.

    Dry leaves

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    I'm not sure what to look for/at... there is an interesting pattern there but I think it needs some tighter cropping or zooming in. Perhaps a bit more contrast as well.
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