steve_l

I think the lighting on her face looks great.  The only thing I would add is a hair light. She has beautiful dark hair which is perfect for an additional hair light.   

in post, I would clean up her loose hairs a little bit   If you want some tips how, email me and I will show you a really easy effective way to clean up stray hairs

You did a great job on this.    

Thank you for taking a look at my image. I respect all opinions and learn

from them. Thank you.

 Alan, by the way.    A train did come and we had to get off the tracks in a hurry.  The crew on the train certainly got an eyefull  as they passed by.   LOL    

Thank you everybody for your critiques.  I agree with all of you.  When i look at the photo again, i find the borders distracting.  Also, a little more fill light would have been better.  And I probably should have posed her a little different so the foot is not coming out of her back. Thanks all of you.  I really appreciate your opinions and will keep working at it.

Steve