detlef

November 25, 2001

you use the right angle James but the wrong time of day , you also cut of canada place on the right....try again...I don`t want you to compare....nor duplicate anything but I find I learn a lot from other photographers....look up a couple of my shots, same angle on this site...

November 25, 2001

love this shot...clean lines...great composition and lighting...did you use black and white film and colour this image or was it orig. a colour image?

November 25, 2001

A playful nude....great subject...but the model just hangs there...shadows and background is too distacting...maybe use your lens wide open at 2.8...also why cut off her feet?

November 25, 2001

this is certainly a scene out of an everyday life...still highly sensual..but I also think there are many distractions here...making your eye wonder around, instead of viewing this sleeping beauty.

November 25, 2001

actually I like this much better...now what do you think if you would crop this image so the window is not in the centre....maybe crop a bit on the right side of the wall and bottom....am I crazy to think that?

November 25, 2001

If the window was a bit bigger for the model to have more room,- I think this pose would have worked better...great idea though..

November 25, 2001

I think there is too much of a seperation in the picture. You have the foreground...so much to look at and then you have the City...also somewhat obstracted by the steel girders...the sky on the left side of the city is also dead space. If you would have changed your angle up higher and pointed the camera somewhat down ...gettin only the edges of the girder as a lead in...and concentrated on the city with the fog....what do you think...

November 25, 2001

very nice composition and depth of field. Usually I don`t like blaaah skies...but I think it works well here...Good Job Peter

November 24, 2001

Love what you have done to start with...great composition...your finish is the ice`n on the cake!!

November 22, 2001

This image looks very peaceful with its surreal colours. Very nice composition.

November 22, 2001

this image expresses a really nice mood...very good exposure...delightful.....I have also looked at this folder and all your others ....you are a very good photographer and you put a lot of love into it....

November 20, 2001

You have an interesting Folder Mark. Love the different angles and shutterspeeds you use. The texture in cloud formations are 1st rate!!! Excellent work thru out.

November 20, 2001

Your portfolio so far is very interesting. You show a good eye for diverse subjects. Lets see some more!!

November 16, 2001

very sensual seductive pose....love her facial expression....good Job!

November 15, 2001

cute girl and sexy pose,,,but lacks attractive lighting...too many shadows in her face and no sparkle to her eyes

November 15, 2001

the subtle range of colours, and repeating mountain slopes make for a peaceful image. Very nice.

November 15, 2001

Homeless man...but what does your eye go to when you first look at the picture....is it the round white sign or the girl in the white top....if the homeless man is your key element in this picture, he should have also been the first thing you should notice. Maybe if he was lit by a headlight or streetlight and you would have captured that moment.....

November 15, 2001

Exposure on every part of this image is superb, but thats just it....too busy of an image. My eye wonders around from corner to corner, nothing is holding me.