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Fred,

 

I think this shot would be better if, a) the white background was cropped out of the frame, b) the antlers were elevated and separated, and c) more body was showing, he's too compressed. He's also backlit and fill flash may have helped brighten him up.

 

cheers

Well done.

 

I would have liked to see more of the players facing the camera.

Anders,

 

Very, very nice.

 

I might have pulled her hair back out of the way on her right side, maybe even both sides

 

Great light!

Russ,

 

I think you could get much closer. Your waterfall is only about a quarter of the frame and detail is blown out.

Something!

 

Oh, you mean comment on the photo.

 

What a blatant and shameless attempt to disguise this as a photo critique, when really you just want to proudly display your newborn son.

 

He looks like Winston Churchill, which is what our new grandson born in March looks like, so take no offense.

 

Actually, he has a little understated and pensive smile, which means he will be trouble in the years to come and undoubtedly a, "chick magnet".

 

Congratulations anyway.

Dennis,

 

I like it.

Maybe a little longer focal length would bring in the Apostles for greater impact, possibly panning up and to the right slightly would add more clouds to the scene and place the first Apostles in that golden third spot of the frame . They have more interest for me than the foreground. All that said it is a pretty good image.

Ryan,

 

Your fisherman blends too much with the background and the roof is too bright, crop it out.

 

Good luck with more.

Govind,

 

Well, it's crisp but it's not something I do. Maybe use a whole roll of film shooting different angles, up, down. This, to me, looks cut off, like there should be more but that's my everything needs order kind of thinking.

 

 

I like this longer focal length look. Good job