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joffre_swait

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    duality

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    The composition very much supports the conceptualization reflected in the title. Congratulations! Greater depth of field would have helped to bring the backdrop and shadow into better focus, which would have been helpful ...

     

    Untitled

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    I find the lighting good, the forward sloping shoulders do indeed seem to add drama/motion/tension to the composition.

     

    The only suggestion I have is perhaps to crop the chin out of the picture. The upturn of light on the side is pleasing, but the front view of the chin itself may add some distraction, hence the suggested crop.

     

    Good work ...

     

    Solitude

          4
    I think that what makes this photograph is the juxtaposition of water action and magnitude of the falls, with the tranquility/serenity communicated by the fisherman. Thus, I don't really know that a lot of manipulation, detail, etc., would really help. Good eye!

    Untitled

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    I like the subtle coloration, good composition, though the black shadow in the upper right hand corner is a bit distracting (not that you could do much about it).

    Untitled

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    The almost monochromatic nature of this photo appeals strongly to me ... from a compositional point of view there's nothing to really focus on, even though the front row of birds (roseate spoonbills?) helps ... good job, congratulations on the picture.
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