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mbuntag

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  1. This is really more a textual design critique than a photo critique (the photo works): You need to work on the spacing of your type. The organization between the text and image could be improved, but right now the viewer's eye isn't led anywhere. And the copyright notice is sloppily arranged and intrusive. get it all in one line.

    pigs

          5
    This would be a disturbing image to many people, especially those who would rather not think about where their food comes from. But in many countries, slaughtering animals is still part of daily life. Still it's a little unsettling to see the blank stares in the lifeless pigs' eyes.

    Content

          6
    That's a pretty big area to clean up. Convert image into CYMK or RGB in Photoshop, choose all channels or find the channel with the most blur, duplicate it (so you have a back-up channel in case of mistakes), carefully select the area and feather it, and apply an unsharp mask. It might not totally get rid of the blur, but it might reduce it.

    Lightning

          11
    A very simple and symmetrical composition executed nicely with the pictures split into thirds. I'm almost tempted to cut-off the top or bottom to throw of the balance a bit. Overall it's nicely done.
  2. I think the photo would have worked better if the texture was reduced, or at least removed in the rectangle area because the eye seems to have had a lot of detail before you applied the Photoshop filter.
  3. A very nice portrait, and my favorite in the folder. I agree with the first comment to try to make the lighted side of the face a little darker (based on what I see on the monitor), but overall this is an effective use of a simple lighting set-up.
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