A Study Of Boredom

I`m more or less new to "serious" photography, but I would like some feedback on my early attempts.

Way too washed out. I like the idea of the person being blurred by a long exposure but the overexposure of the background doesn't work.

Good clarity. Really focuses viewers attention on the gear instead of the person... It works.

Either boredom, or the ultimate Excedrin Headach.

I'm not sure the person's body language and lack of clear facial expression denotes boredom. The washed-out look reminds me of a hospital or some other impersonal office space.