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johnanewton

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  1. After your e.mail I decided to take another look at this photo. What is it I dont like.. It is taken nicly, the framing is good, the exposure works well, the focus is just right, I just dont like it, it says to me .. I am glad you came around, thanks for the $20.. sorry I didnt like this.

    Taking a nap

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    I am not keen on animal pics, I had to look quite hard to see what was going on, this animal doesnt seem to be asleep to me, if only you could have got around to the right so we could see its head.

    B/W Nude

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    Hi Amy. I feel the only thing lacking in your self portraits is a photographer, Its hard to work out where you are in the frame, if your not there. Try to engage with the camera, the missing link in so many of the photos on this site, If you dont want people to know what you look like , I dont see why your taking these photos or come to that showing them.

    Untitled

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    Tree,pose,smile,lighting...

     

    At least she is engaging with you, a nice change here. I would have brought her forward, made the trees out of focus,stopped her playing with her face and either smile with teeth or don't bother, Climbing down or up or hanging from the tree.

    AN_BW_001

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    Whats going on here ? Why do so many women on here strain to aviod the camera. Engagement is a high priority for me,otherwise nicely shot.
  2. How could this be a better photo ? Its hard to say, its so nice to see a well thought out pose and construction, It would seem that the models face is out of focus, I would have liked to see it in the frame, even if it was totaly blurred or dark.

    Nude Venus 9

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    This one seem a bit weird to me. Is that a towel ?

    Maybe she should have been laying down, with a bit less towel. or a bit more but not all over the lower part or her body, maybe show a bit of hip.

    sin (nude)

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    Its not as if I like boots (I do !)This shot shows great potential. If I was to take this shot I would ask her to cross her ankles to cover her modesty, highlighting the boots, hopefully making her a little more relaxed and giving a bit more attitude to the pic.
  3. I am sorry to say that I do dislike this picture, I had to rate it 5 and 5 but disimbodied heads really do nothing for me, the overall colouring of this shot makes me think of tea stain or pea soup. Pictures of women if cropped should not include masses of empty space. An Unreal photo like this misses some other object in the picture, I Found this soul-less (sorry!)
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