peter_yankulov 0 Posted July 29, 2001 Another photograph of Venus. Thank you for your critique. Peter. Link to comment
GerrySiegel 868 Posted July 29, 2001 I liked the image on satin sheets. This one,well, looks like a piece of a whole. Did you crop out everything but the lower torso for reason? Not against navels,per se, or portions of a torso, or even a hand, when the design is striking. Somehow this one misses for me. What do others think I wonder? ( Candid feedback relating to the composition not lighting nor exposure. You aced those long ago, Pete) Again, appreciate the opportunity to comment on your work.Warmly, a lover of our species in its liquid, satiny skin form.\And plan to try some figure work soon now that I have conquered all other photo frontiers:-).GS Link to comment
johnanewton 0 Posted July 30, 2001 This one seem a bit weird to me. Is that a towel ?Maybe she should have been laying down, with a bit less towel. or a bit more but not all over the lower part or her body, maybe show a bit of hip. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted August 1, 2001 This is tough to judge, It would make an excellent magazine illustration, but as a fine art photo (my primary interest), it doesn't really speak to me. Great use of light and shadow. the woman's torso seems very three dimensional. If there were a technique criteria I would give you high marks on that and medium on Asthetics and Originality. Link to comment
vadim1 0 Posted August 1, 2001 I love the texture on the sheet the woman is carrying. It's very sensual I find. Shadows along her stomach area leading down to the sheets is what makes me like it. This would be great for some "Skin Care" advertisment in a magazine. Good work Peter. Link to comment
jason_villafranca1 0 Posted August 1, 2001 nice belly button.... oh and the pic is pretty good too...lol Link to comment
staci_ferrara 0 Posted August 1, 2001 Nicely done but I eould have liked a little lower crop at the top Link to comment
james___ 0 Posted August 8, 2001 I just love this bellybutton. Really sensuous. Great color too. The towel and whether she is lying or standing doesn't matter. This is all about that beautiful belly and navel. The hands are like a beautiful frame leading us to the subject. Nice image. I can feel the warmth and senuality. Link to comment
rameses__ii 0 Posted August 8, 2001 I love the lighting. It works extreamly well with the hands, but even better with the satin. The shadows are awesome, the pose is right on. Love it!!! Link to comment
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