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mark_a

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    Those boots

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    Have to agree - the boots don't do anything for the picture except detract from the models beautiful legs. Good idea though... I think trying new ideas is how we sometimes create great shots. Even if you used stiletto heels I don't think it would be a nice as the one without them.

    Wine

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    I like this a lot. I'd prefer more of the glasses stem in the shot, but it still works as a commercial shot for the winery. The contrast in colors are great ans add a lot to the shot.
  1. I think this shot has potential. However, there are a few things that I would change (IMHO). First, the shadow from her hair across her nose is distracting. The bright spot in the trees in front of her face is distracting too. Maybe just a little more light on her from the back. Good composition and angle of the shot.

    Federica

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    Elena, Nice portrait. Your lighting works well and you have posed the model well. Personally I would prefer a softer glow, but that's a personal choice.

    Untitled

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    I agree that the white in the upper right is distracting - you could get rid of it in Photoshop if you wanted to. I like the lighting - it adds a different look than a standard portrait. I also like the angle that you shot her at - a little different approach.
  2. The lighting is a little flat but it's passable. Although landscapes are not my thing, I like the the way the phot makes you sense coldness - a feeling of winter or late fall. The colors are good and the sky is excellent. I'd suggest offsetting the tree more to the right because it almost splits the frame down the middle. Also the horizen is too centered in the frame so moving with cropping a littel would increase the overall effect of the shot. I keep wanting to see someone riding down that path on a bike... entering from the left side...
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