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jayson_cardwell

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    Dew Leaf

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    Very nice, but the blurred focus of the left hand side takes away form the main focus point of your work. I suggest playing around with cropping to eliminate the problem area.
  1. Considering that the image is in amongst the branches does take away fromt eh natural flow. If the figure were more to the righ on the tree and there silhouetted against the sun then that would have made a wonderful addition to the photo.
  2. Very nice, if you have a personal problem with the cropping you could always crop it closer and focus on the eye alone. You have enough detail to support that as an individual picture in itself.
  3. very spectacular shot, but I do find one 'flaw' if nothing at all. I gind myself being drawn towards the 'void' above the light. Looking for something int he background rather then the subject itself. Maybe a little off the top will bring your viewers back to the light.
  4. Wonderful close-up work, ut next time you might want to change the ngle of your shot. An added extra to a close up will the the image you can see through the water droplets. Maybe next time you can move so that there's more color through the water!
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