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slrshooter

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    I like the tight crop and choice of B&W...I even think that your different choice of composition is kinds cool, but there are a few things that bug me about the shot.

    1) The light source is way too strong and had washed out the top of the couch and the subjects blond (ie. "highly reflective" hair.

    2)The problem in #1 also means you have lost tons of detail in her face. This could have been solved with fill-in flash, a reflector, or large white card.

    3) When modifying the image digitally, you lost a lot of the grey tones (which may account for part of #2). Next time, scan as a color image and convert it to greyscale using the RGB channel panel in your editor, not the "Greyscale" filter. It also helps to save it as a 24bit image if you want better tonal quality.

    ma douce

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    A little too soft for my tastes, but a great "stepladder" style and I love the fact that (at least it looks...) you shot with a diffused flash strait on the hotshoe strait down on the subject. Nothing fancy, but really effective. Good expression in the eyes.
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