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charles_veale

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    Simple Sunset

          4
    I actually like the composition here. The plant is nicely silhouetted against the sunset adds interest to the scent. I don't think that the plant is large enough to dominate the scene and is positioned well on the right hand side. The exposure is excellent as well. Question: Did the Rebel do this, or were you set to manual? The reason I ask is that I have an Elan 7E which pretty much has the same zone metering system as the Rebel 2000.

    Beach-1

          2

    I am a beginner, so excuse the less advanced nature of my crituques

    but I was wondering if this photo is worthy of attention or another

    one for the great bin o' lost negatives.

    kids

          3
    This is hard, while I agree with the previous persons statement about more exposure on the childrens faces, I think that the background is overexposed. The solution to this might be using fill flash for the kids and bringing the exposure of the background down a step.

    Mudro Lake

          17
    Nice pic. You have some really inspired stuff in your portfolio. I love the prairie flowers at sunset and the Lulu lake photo. Keep shooting.

    Escape

          3
    Steven, You have a good eye for a picture. I liked several of your night shots. This one has good shadow work. Goes to show that you don't need the $1500 camera to take good shots.

    Sun Rays

          7
    Looks like a watercolor. I don't think that the tree tops would add much to this shot. Try using the Fuji Velvia slide film. You will be AMAZED with how much color this film adds. It's stunning.

    Water Games

          12
    Amazing photo. The only minor thing I might add is that the light(?) in the upper left hand corner seems to distract my eye from the simplicity of the scene. Other than that, you did a perfect job with the composition here. I wish I could do this.
  1. Personally, I think this one might work if NONE of the surface structures were visable. Just the towers. You might need to change your shooting location to make this effective though.

    Angel

          2

    I am a beginning photographer and would like some advice on this

    shot. I was going for a mood with the grainy film, but dont know that

    I achieved it.

    Snow

          5
    Overexposed just a hair. Half a stop less and the snow might have had a bit more contrast. Also, a polarizer might work here.
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