leeuwtje

Nice model. Like the fact that she is lose of the background (which is nicely blurred). Even at the dark part of the background you can still see the detail in her hair.

Nice is also that she looks away from the camera. As if she is really taking a break.

Nice picture with a for me good composition. Two things I find distracting. The shining overexposed spot in her hair and the shadow at her eyes. If it's too sunny the time of the day isn't right. Clouded sky is the best time for outdoor portrait. Please keep us informed, cause your view and the "model" are both very good IMHO.

Mark

Hi,

Your work seems very fresh and real to me. Like a natural beauty who doesn't need make-up.

Mark.

Hi,

Very nice picture!

I like the dynamic of the movement.

Maybe it would be even better is you could see the expression on her face. Just my opinion.

Mark