I am afraid for me it lacks impact and story. It has some elements of geometry with the sequence of sqaures/rectangles but these are not stressed or concentrated on. I think I would crop much tighter to emphasis that geomentry and then brighten up the main subject (the car) and add some contrast to it. The main subject is not bold enough to draw attention as it is.
But then I am not a great car fan.
And if you like the shot then that's good enough!