Mutani

I would appreciate your comments on this portrait because it received

mixed comment at my club when I entered it there.

Thanks!

This is a good portrait, pleasant to look at I like her relaxed, confident smile and posture. What disturbs me a bit is that it is not clear if it is a staged portrait, then there is some details that could be improved, or more probably, a spontaneous street portrait, but then I miss some surrounding information. Friendly yours.

Very nice portrait with good pose

Excellent work.

Well, your club is crazy- this is excellent - I don't see how it could be improved -

Mark

Thank you all for taking the time to comment. I appreciate all of your feedback. Philippe, it was completely unposed in the sense that I happened upon the scene and just asked the young lady to stand near to her home. I did not direct her in how she should stand etc.

Many thanks.

 

"A moment in time perfectly captured"

looking at the eyes the focus appears soft, otherwise a fine  portrait.