Yosemite

converted from color negative. Please comment regarding any aspect you like.

Thank you.

You're off to a good start here. Good sharpness and tonal range. I assume you used a GND filter on the sky, and it worked well. A couple things could improve the shot, though.

First, the horizon line (or at least the far shore of the lake) is off-level and leaning to the right. I don't know if this is how it really looked, but it makes the entire photo seem cock-eyed.

Second, it's all just a little dark for my tastes. Brightening it up by up to a full stop might help.

Third, it bothers me that the rock on the upper left is cut off. The one on the upper right doesn't bother me because I know it extends way past the top of the frame, but just barely losing the top of the left rock seems wrong.