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...wish I didn't crop model's belly button -- you can just make it out

starting on the bottom edge of the frame -- as I reckon it would 'anchor'

the diagonal line of her torso in the bottom-right corner,

counterbalancing the the other diagonal line created by her breasts.

...and as far as the breasts are concerned, wish the one in the

foreground was rimmed stronger -- the rim light is too weak (or rather

it's an angle of ilumination / positioning issue) to separate it from the

torso and accentuate its roundness effectively.

Your take?