The Squeeze

Im really interested in what you think

I think this is a nice idea, captured in good light. The only thing I would suggest is to exclude the small rocks in the upper right. To me, the 3 important elements here are the upper rock in cool light, the lower rock in warm light, and the main cluster of rocks jammed in between (nicely placed about 1/3 from the left and top). The rocks at the upper right throw off the simplicity and harmony of the image, which i feel is its strength.

 

Anish

Anish, Thank you for the detailed comment. I'll remove those obstructions. :-))

I think Anish is exactly right. I would also like just a skosh more detail from the darkest reach to the left of the boulder. I wonder if double-processing the raw file and a bit of image blending in PS might not do the job? Nicely seen and captured. Good work! Cheers! Chris

Very well seen... and a great title, Bettie! Love this series!

All these very helpful comments are encouraging each in their own way. thank you Everyone for taking the time to look and comment. `i will indeed get back to the image for futher experiments with your suggestions! cheers!

Excellent composition, and  almost an abstraction. Bravo.