Portrait #2

One of the portraits...

Loos very slightly over exposed. Wonderful expression, nice composition.

Very nice classic lighting

This is good. Her eyes are sharrp and clear and well lit. In terms of critique, the light is a little harsh on her face overall, losing some modelling and detail and the pose is a little too conventional to really rank high on originality.

Its pleasing and she is pretty. I found the pin on her sweater a little distracting. Also, perhaps if she turns her head a bit so she is not staring directly into the lens. It looks like the lighting is from left to right. Perhaps a secondary flash on the right to eliminate the shadows on that side.

 

I still really like it.

 

Tom

Very nice expression and pose, but I feel that the camera position is just too high. I would also use a light (or a reflector) on her hair to separate her from the background a bit more.

Face a little overexpose. Try using PS to darken.