More Pelican Dreams

Trying a new idea...you can tell me if it sucks! Thanks for any

comments.

Pretty cool. I like it. Composition is excellent, and the processing is very well done. I think if I were to make any criticism, that from a purely light/dark standpoint, it has a slight tendency to be a bit side heavy, with the darkness of the bird being a little too overpowering. What if you lightend up on the opacity of that bird?

Kim,

 

I like it. As mentioned the bird dominates the scene, you might back off the solid black a bit. I really like the touch of color, maybe just a touch of color on a spot in the water.

 

Otherwise super job.

 

Scott

Ilike what you did with this photo. If I have a suggestion is, maybe, to lighten up the bird a bit ( more white in it). Other than this, excellent job and great effect.

I actually have two versions of this - the other one has the bird in B&W - see what you think.

 

I prefer the pelican in color as you originally posted it...the little splash of color really draws you in...the b&w seems a little flat to me. As for the "heaviness" of the pelican in the forefront, I actually like that...it puts him right there in front of you and leaves the rest in the back...I guess I'm saying it adds more depth because he seems more solid...he's more real...he's right there in front of you. Does that make sense? Anyway, I like this composite. Very nice idea.

 

Leslie

Did one more version, leaving the orange in the beak, but lightening the pelican somewhat. I think I like it best; the orange in the beak balances the little splash of color in the boat. Comments on all three versions welcomed!

The latest version is the best. Assuming that you brought the pelican in as a layer, I would consider just toning down the opacity a little bit more. That's not to say it isn't darn good the way it is.

Now that I see the third version, I think it's a wonderful compromise...lightened a bit, kept some color, kept the depth. Great job! :)

 

Leslie

Did one last version, keeping the pelican more "real" instead of sketch-like.

Kim, I like all the versions for different reasons, but the first is the best in my opinion, good work.

Excelente trabajo tecnico, magnifico juego de luz y color, perfecta composicion, saludos cordiales Kim.

Outstanding image. I like each version but I believe the last offering is perhaps the best. ~Sky

Me too - I like the last image.

I printed out the last image and have it framed in a barnwood frame - looks pretty cool. It's off to a gallery today. Thanks for all the comments and suggestions.

Super cool & I love the last version. Wonderful idea that you are trying.

Very original and nice viewpoint Kim, lovely composition. my regards...

You had created an excellent DOF ! simple & very interesting. Regards.

Very creative Kim. Great shot and perfect title.

I was going to agree with Sondra until you did the last version, excellent!

And may I add, a much better use of the shrimp boat than in your Destruction series.

Regards, Dave

Very original and creative rendering. Strong composition

Thanks, guys. I'm very happy with the print copy as in V4.

Kim- what super image. Super! NO suggestions at all, except sell this one :)

Awesome shot, as usual, great use of contrast and selective muted color, your work is always inspirational! I agree sell it:)

The last version is what made it to the Art Gallery. We'll see if it sells. Thanks for visiting, everyone.