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Two Birds and the Tree


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I like your composition with the tree on the right hand side of the frame and the two birds flying across the frame from left to right. Wing position is also excellent and illustrates the flight pattern of this particular bird species. Also, the moody sky adds interest at the top of the frame.

 

The only problem I have with your picture, and this is meant as constructive criticism, is the straight line as a horizon. I'd rather see the tree standing in its own environment, not just selected and cropped out as you've done. But maybe including the ground was not possible when you took the tree picture?

 

regards

 

Jan

 

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This is indeed beautiful Kaushik. Your compositions of these minimalist masterpieces have elevated you to being one of the masters of this form of photography. I love your work and this "picture-poem" is no exception. Congrats and Best Wishes to you. Regards, Kelvin.
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Hi Kaushik. This is an amazing shot, So well composed and the tonality fits perfect. You are a very talented guy. Both you portraits and landscapes are amazing. This is just pure art and a joy to view. All my thanks and best wishes-Jim
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The only trough constructive comments is here from Jan Van Laethem.

 

 

"The only problem I have with your picture, and this is meant as constructive criticism, is the straight line as a horizon. I'd rather see the tree standing in its own environment, not just selected and cropped out as you've done. But maybe including the ground was not possible when you took the tree picture?"

 

The idea is great, the execution need improvements. The sky is burned-in badly in two places. And as Jan mentioned, the strait line and below it do not ad to the composition. I repeat, it is a great idea.

 

Cheers; Bela

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