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Excellent & original work, congrats. 6-7!

Fabulous originality. Love the contrast of the in-focus wine glass and your slightly grainy body. Wonderfully relaxed and seedy at the same time. Wish I had taken it!!

Excellent! I think that cropping off the bottom 10-20% would make a stronger composition.

Cool. I like this one best (better than glass laying down). Hmmmm... I see what they're saying about the crop - but I also for some reason like the square format on this one - and the "balance" resulting from that format. Cropping to a landscape rectangle seems too much.

Very strong shot but I agree with Bill about cropping...see cropped example... I am looking forward to seeing much more of your promising work

nice composition

Sabine, Great composition ! Very good in b/w.

I also would suggest to crop a little bit from the bottom.

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Oh, I like so much this scene with the nude woman on the bad, but I dont like that glass in front, and only a part of it! why did you leave the glass in foreground! the scene itself is so beautiful that in my opinion you really dont need that glass! but it seems more original like that!

Oh, well, I opt for the removing of the glass!

Thank you,B:)liana

Very nice shot!

 

ciao

Very good.

Great shot...i love the DOF, and the imagination.

 

Dave

Sabine, this is a terrific shot that needs a little cropping at the bottom and to the left: I'd try to keep this as square as possible. Your photo is beautifully composed, good DOF, and nicely toned.

Why is the glass not used/stained with a history?

I like a lot all the curves!! May be I would like to see a curve sofa instead of this one.

Bravo. light, subject, mood, tone..all perfect.

WOW, superb!!!

The glass needs to be seen a bit more. As is, it leads the eye off the frame. Very interesting shot though. I like it quite a bit. The glass knocked it from a 6 to a 5.

this is a very original idea..

beautiful composition. Has a meditative quality to it.

Excellent composition, good work.