Veronika_5

This picture was meant to have a flirtatious feel to it -- does it?

Thanks for your feedback!

PS I'll post below, as the first "critique" entry, a link to a full-length shot (slightly different pose and no fill-in flash) for you to have a chance to compare the two; I prefer the three-quarter length one.

the thong is unnecessary, I guess. she looks more cheaper with it, then what she would have looked like without it showing.

...wow, someone was fast (the fastest feedback I've ever received), so this isn't the first posting any more...

Anyway, I like both shots, but if had to choose one, would vote for 3/4 length, mainly because the fill-in flash did it good.

To respond to your feedback, Silje, please note both the title of my request for critique and what I've asked for in it: this picture was never supposed to be a serious or "deep" portrait with a model looking like a noble woman. In this particular case it's therefore not a matter of whether or not you personally like the result, but whether I've achieved the result/effect I intended to (?) Please try to disregard that the model looks "more cheaper" to you because of her G-strings being visible above hipsters and instead tell me if I've managed to create a frivolous or coquettish "feel" about her.