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Exposure Date: 2015:12:26 15:44:30;
Make: Panasonic;
Model: DMC-LX100;
ExposureTime: 1/320 s;
FNumber: f/5;
ISOSpeedRatings: 200;
ExposureProgram: Normal program;
ExposureBiasValue: 0/100;
MeteringMode: Pattern;
Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode;
FocalLength: 15 mm;
FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 34 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop CC 2015 (Macintosh);


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Supriyo,

     Such wonderful use of overlapping shapes, like overlapping invisible rooms or divisions. It's  fantastic! The light adds so much to the story, especially with the ornamental woodwork. I appreciate your use of correct, non distorted verticals and the use of a 4:5 (I think) ratio. However, your black border cropped out a terminating point of the nearest ornamental woodwork. I am merely being picky but the corrected perspective and 4x5 lends to an architectural and the immense strength of this piece lies heavily, though not entirely on its composition. Seeing a cropped out corner of a potential frame, and therefore a potential compositional element just seems off to me. I'd rather see that corner of woodworking  then have the shadow/light line in the bottom right perfectly terminate in the corner. Just my two cents. I'm new to the site/community so I apologize if i e said too much. This has certainly landed a spot in my favorites. Very nice job Supriyo. 

-Steve

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Hello Steve,

Your comment is so valuable, and no, you don't have to apologize. The point you made is very true. The problem was, while composing the image in the electronic viewfinder of the camera, I was more focused on the shadow part and I missed the top corner. It was hard to see the dark top part since it was, well, too dark,... and I just composed based on guess. It was not until I lightened the shadow in Lightroom, that I noticed the crop at the top. I am thankful that you spent time to notice it, which I really appreciate.

 

Welcome to this website. You have few pictures in your portfolio now, but so far I see a love and passion for patterns. Hope to see many inspiring works from you in the coming future. All the best!

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