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On the Offensive!


LenMarriott

Nikon D5100, 55-200 @ 68mm (102mm FF equiv), 1\640 @ f4.2, ISO 4500, hand held. LM


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Great action shot, good clarity and well detailed. 

The ice itself though seems to a bit bright and harsh (although I'm sure this is good reproduction of how it was)  and i wonder if a reduction of highlights and whites would make it that much more eye friendly?

Also a crop of the immediate foreground that puts the players right up close makes for a bit more drama I think. 

Sounds like I'm being hyper critical, but I'm really not, I just think there is great potential here and I'm just typing thoughts and idea's.

 

Compliments & Best Regards 

 

Alf 

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Thanks for your constructive comment\critique.  Just what the doctor ordered!  The ice is a tad bright as I boosted the levels (curves) to improve detail in the player's faces.  Your suggested crop is valid.   It would only give greater precedence to the players, a good result.   My only excuse was that I wanted to leave some room for the play to develop.  I'll use your suggestion should I decide to print this one.  In the meantime I'll play around with it to see if I have the skills to affect one area without adversely affecting the others.  Gets tricky at times.  Best, LM.

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