Julie

What's wrtong with this portrait? While I understand it's not

stellar, it seems pretty good to me. I shot it for a publicity-type

shot. I agree with the previous post--top should be cropped 5-10%.

Comments, suggestions, ratings would be helpful. I'm not really

interested in shooting portraits, but I'd like to be able to do them

competently. Thanks.

Nice skin tone, good exposure values, and sharp focus.

As other have noted, cropping at the top would help as would a little more catch light in the eyes perhaps provided by fill flash.