leo burkey 0 Posted April 15, 2011 The sunset color and wonderful composition make this another winner, Stephen. Link to comment
BelaMolnar 2 Posted April 16, 2011 I like this image very much, lighting on the rock is incredible, the composition and the geometric form in nice harmony, almost a musics, shadows, contrast excellent, . . . but . . . the sky in my monitor looks extremely over saturated, almost glowing like a radioactive material. IMHO. My monitor? It is hard to look at it.Gratings. Link to comment
stp 6 Posted April 16, 2011 Bela, trust me, I didn't have a polarizing filter and I didn't touch the saturation levels. I have a series of three shots, all taken toward the end of the day; this is number three, just before the shadows hit these rocks (the rock on the bottom is already in shadow, and I'm debating a crop that would eliminate it; what do folks think??). The rocks have taken on a very reddish hue; in the earlier shots, the red wasn't nearly as pronounced.This is located in Joshua Tree National Park in southern California, east of Los Angeles and northeast of Palm Springs. This particular part of the park is in the Jumbo Rocks campground, almost due south of the northeast entrance to the park at Twentynine Palms.I too had long wondered where this was located. Turns out I had been within walking distance of these rocks on many occasions in past years, except I always walked in the wrong direction. This taught me another lesson: explore; don't always go to the same general area time after time, even if that area has a lot to offer. Link to comment
stp 6 Posted April 17, 2011 For many years I had wanted to photograph these rocks, but I didn't know where in Joshua Tree they were located. Turns out I was within walking distance of them on many occasions but didn't know it. This is just prior to sunset, and the color of the rocks changes dramatically. Comments and suggestions (esp. regarding the shaded rock at the bottom) are appreciated. Thanks. Link to comment
sallycd 0 Posted April 17, 2011 Outstandingly composed. The color saturation is good.Thanks for sharing... Link to comment
matthijs 0 Posted April 17, 2011 Nice... About the shaded rock though. I'd say it's a case of "cut/don't clip". The shaded rock part is so small that it seems a mistake. If you'd made it bigger (panning down) you'd have shown us the rock on purpose. Plus it would probably balance the sky better. It does not have to be equally big because the dark shape has a lot more mass than the light sky. Hope this helps, Matthijs. Link to comment
stp 6 Posted April 17, 2011 Thanks for the comments. Matthijs, your comment about this being small enough to look like a mistake (not seen) is a good one -- it's a comment I often make when only slivers of something make it into the photo. This is a result of a fixed focal length lens and literally not being able to move one foot forward or one foot backward -- I was stuck on a small ledge. It will go, and then I have to consider making this a rectangle rather than a square; that will depend on what has to go and what is able to remain. Link to comment
BelaMolnar 2 Posted April 19, 2011 Hi Stephen. You need this shadow part for the composition. If it is more a little, it would help more. It add a balance to the sky. The image has a foreground anchor point, if it is not there, the orange/red rock would flatly sink to the bottom. . . . The sky ?. . . I have to check my monitor color calibration, because the blue has a neon glow on my monitor. Or! My eyes fooling me, because of the saturated red glow of the rocks. The other thing I noticed, you have some artifact close to the rock edges in the blue. My monitor, or my eyes fooling me again? It is a beautiful image, excellent composition. I wouldn't change anything on this image. Oh. Using a polarizer, or GND, etc., is not a crime. It is natural and if somebody creating a dark sky, and improving the image visual effect, so be it. It is OK. I love those rocks very much.Greetings, Stephen Link to comment
daverave 1 Posted April 21, 2011 It's a tough call on the foreground rock, Stephen, it could go either way. I might tend to eliminate it only because it is not as sharp as the rest of the image but it does provide a bit of a visual anchor/counterpoint. The sky looks just fine on my monitor. Link to comment
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