alfbailey 3 Posted August 18, 2010 I'm out of my comfort zone with this one, not my usual landscape, I went to photograph the unusual lighthouse, but I couldn't resist taking a shot of the little boy hanging onto the back of his Dads trousers desperately trying to get a turn of flying the kite. ( Dad was having far too much fun to listen) You thoughts and comments are always appreciated. Thank You. Link to comment
steveshinn 0 Posted August 18, 2010 Hi Alf,Beautiful colors and presentation. I see what you were after but I think you might have skipped the rather modern looking lighthouse and done a vertical shot of the fliers. Link to comment
hstelljes 41 Posted August 18, 2010 Hi Alf, I like almost anything with lighthouses. I actually think this is a good image because it's more of an active scene because of the introduction of the people into the photo. I know from all your prior work that if you were just shooting the lighthouse we would probably have been presented with a different view of the lighthouse and yet another great image from you. But I like this because it's different, it certainly is a unique lighthouse by the way. Take care my friend......Holger Link to comment
alberto_quintal 2 Posted August 19, 2010 WOW!! Very beautiful, I love the colors.Alberto Link to comment
Funtak 0 Posted August 19, 2010 Excellent capture, beautiful scene yet father and son gave it true value.. Link to comment
elportebonheur 0 Posted August 19, 2010 You really caught the moment...and indeed, father,son and kite make this one very much 'alive'. Nice area btw, and if I'm not mistaken you can see the lighthouse also from the golf course. Fine document, just right for the time of the year - compliments Alf Link to comment
sumon_mukherjee 0 Posted August 19, 2010 A beautiful slice of life with colors of emotionality. An attractive story-telling composition against a fantastic backdrop. Best regards. Link to comment
photo by patsy dunn 1 Posted August 19, 2010 Alf, Wonderful image with amazing details & color. Take care, Patsy Link to comment
trisha jean-angela 5 Posted August 19, 2010 Lovely capture of a cherished father and son moment! Thank you for sharing. :) Link to comment
Donna Stavis 0 Posted August 20, 2010 I like the proportions of wide open sky, ample view of the green and water, tall lighthouse as backdrop for the young boy, who, in proportion to the scope of things looks so small, wanting to fly that bright kite high up. It's filled with emotion. Tender shot with the father/son expedition. Link to comment
tonyfrench 0 Posted August 20, 2010 Alf, the scale of the tower in relationship to the father/son is great. THe kite has the exact right placement against the blue of the incredible sky. The colors and detail are wonderful. Link to comment
vetterhome1 0 Posted August 20, 2010 Love the highlights: the dragon, the tower and the walking persons: perfect mood in it. BR Joerg Link to comment
sidselto 0 Posted August 20, 2010 Good catch of the situation. The colours of the kite catches the eye.Sidsel Link to comment
matthijs 0 Posted August 20, 2010 Yes, I really like this picture... ...however (you saw that one coming) I think that it tries to tell to many stories and leaves too little breathing room for them. The kid and dad are very small and the light tower is very close to the edge -as is the kite. That said, it made me smile so in that way it certainly works! Matthijs. Link to comment
ArtLionse 0 Posted August 20, 2010 Very well seen Alf! Like the contrasted colors, makes a special feeling to the picture. AL Link to comment
alfbailey 3 Posted August 21, 2010 STEVEMany thanks for your visit and your feedback, much appreciated. Yeah I suppose a vertical shot would have been a realistic option, but my landscape habits are hard to break, and I couldn't resist the lighthouse.Cheers SteveAlfHOLGER We share a common passion for lighthouses Holger, and yeah this one is different, comparatively modern, but interesting all the same, the people just happened to be there and the situation was quite amusing, Thank you for your interest Holger much appreciated!Kind RegardsAlfALBERTOMany thanks for your visit and kind comments, the colours of the kite are one of the things that struck me too.Kind regardsAlfVLADIMIRSincere thanks for your kind comments and feedback, I think it's a father & son scene that most people would b able to relate to.Kind RegardsAlfELSincere thanks for your visit, your words are most encouraging, coming as they are from what I would consider to be, an expert in the field of street photography. I am suprised at your geographic knowledge of this area, it is quite remote and not many people seem to know it.Cheers ELAlfRUUDMany thanks for your visit and kind words, much appreciated!Kind RegardsAlf SUMONMany thanks, for your kind words and feedback. "Every picture tells a story" or so they say.....I'm glad this one did.Kind RegardsAlfPATSYThank you ! I apprecate your feedback and kind words.Kind RegardsAlfTRISHAI hope you are keeping well. Thank you for your thoughts and interest, much appreciated!Kind RegardsAlfDONNAMany thanks for your thoughts and feedback. You always seem to have such a concise way of summing up an image, and I agree with the sentiments the you outline here. I would have ideally liked to get the best of both worlds, a closer view of the father and son, but that would have mean't losing the perspective of the surrounding open space, and I wanted to retain that for all the reasons you described so well.Cheers DonnaAlfTONYMany thanks for your visit and feedback, i'm really pleased you liked the scale of the image, I kind of struggled to get a compromise between detail of the father & son and a view of the kite, the lighthouse and open space.Kind RegardsAlfJORG Many thanks for stopping by, I appreciate your thoughts and comments!Kind RegardsAlfSIDSELSincere thanks for your visit and kind comments, yeah that kite is kinda vivid!Kind RegardsAlfMATTHIJSMany thanks for your kind words and interesting feedback. I'm not sure about it telling too many stories, for me theres only one, and thats the interaction of father and son, but it's subjective like everything else and well all place our own interpretations to an image and thankfully see it differently. As for being too close to the edge....hmmm well I did crop into the image slightly ....but I'd say there was comfortable space around all of the objects. You are right about the father & son being small of course, but getting a closer view would inevitabley mean losing another aspect of the image, and the space gave a flavour of the surrounding area........well thats my excuse anyway : - ) And errm yeah It made me smile too!Kind RegardsAlfARTSincere thanks for your kind words, much appreciated!Best RegardsAlf Link to comment
elportebonheur 0 Posted August 21, 2010 Not surprising at all, it's quite easy: I have good friends in Carlisle. And Carlisle - Silloth is just a short trip as you know. That's why I know the area very well. Have a nice w-e! Link to comment
alfbailey 3 Posted August 21, 2010 ELAhhh that explains it! It is a lovely area, I wish I could spend more time there exploring. You have a great W/E too!Kind RegardsAlfBOBBY Many thanks for your visit and kind comments, much appreciated!Kind RegardsAlf Link to comment
swede621 0 Posted August 23, 2010 This is out of my comfort zone as well. I love the story told by the boy and his father. I tend to agree with some of the others in that it would be nice if they were a larger part of the image. A vertical crop might work nicely. The composition if perfect now but would still work with the crop. The colors on the kite would be more promenant and it would still be positioned in the blue ske between the clouds where it stands out the most. Very nice shot as always, though.You never disappoint... Link to comment
richardthompson 0 Posted August 23, 2010 A young laddie earning his wings from an old ace, no doubt. A wonderfully reminiscent scene, Alf. Link to comment
alfbailey 3 Posted August 23, 2010 JERRYMany thanks for your visit and kind comments, I think you could be right about the crop, it would indeed make the figures more prominent, and if I'm thinking along the same lines as yourself, it would also put the figures and the kite into the "thirds" cross sections of the image. My only concern is that losing the lighthouse may also loose some of the mood of the scene, Worth experimenting though. Thanks for your feedback Jerry.Kind RegardsAlfRICHARDMany thanks for your visit and kind comments. I think maybe this is a scenario that a lot of us can relate to in some way.CheersAlf Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted August 23, 2010 Wonderfull scene with beautifull sky and nice colours.If i was the god of the winds i would have blown the wind the other way so father and son would walk into the frame than out of it,It's amazing how the introduction of humans into a frame changes the whole pespective and makes the composition so more complex.Again beautifull shot,well worth the trip to the lighthouse,regards,Harry Link to comment
alfbailey 3 Posted August 23, 2010 You have a very astute eye! and pointed out something I should have spotted myself (walking out of the frame) After slapping myself across the head and muttering the immortal exclamation "Doh" I realised that the former suggestions to crop the image vertically, would have resulted in the figure walking into the frame, but alas without the lighthouse in the scene. Well spotted Harry and my sincere thanks for your kind words and feedback.Kind RegardsAlf Link to comment
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