alfbailey 3 Posted May 2, 2010 This ones for Harry, a more toned down version of the original. I used Tone Compressor on this to get a more subtle natural kind of look but found it rather bland, so then blended elements of another version using details enhancer, hopefully achieving a good level of detail without being too over the top. Your thoughts and comments are always welcome. Thank You. Link to comment
laceyhughes 0 Posted May 2, 2010 I prefer this one over the over-saturated version you first posted. The HDR halo between the sky and background is less obvious in this version. As well as the halos around the boat edges and water, less obvious. The tone of the boats is much more pleasing. I feel, for an HDR, that your sky lacks a little contrast. It appears a little flat to me. Nice job, keep it up. Link to comment
papasan 0 Posted May 3, 2010 Hi Alf,I also like this one much better than the other one. The tones and colors are much more realistic, and the mood is more subtle. Like the early evening calmness before the night. The sky could be darkened a little to increase the mood but that's optional. Regards - michel Link to comment
192 0 Posted May 3, 2010 Very neat shot...Beautiful details and colours.Regards(Bobby). Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted May 3, 2010 The Mk2 version is much more into my taste in about everything. Now your fine composition really comes out in a very attractive way and the sombre vivid colors helps to create a very special mood into the image. Excellent post processing thaat brings oyt the details in that way I know you want it to be. Great presentation Alf. Take good care and all the best to you and your family from Jannica Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted May 3, 2010 Hi Alf,this is really nice (not in your face as the other version) the boats lake and sky look very natural,i have been working with HDR for a year,i usually do both versions,detail enhancer and tone compressor and then decide what suits the image.Why your photos are not for rating? Best regards,Harry Link to comment
alfbailey 3 Posted May 4, 2010 LACYThank you for stopping by and for your kind comments, the sky I deliberately toned down to make it appear more natural in line with the rest of the image, but I can see where your coming from. The feedback is much appreciated!RegardsAlfILKKAMany thanks for your kind words and encouragement.Kind RegardsAlfMICHELMany thanks for your kind comments and also your thoughts and suggestions I really do appreciate the feedback.Kind RegardsAlfBOBBYThank you for your very kind comments, much appreciated!Warm RegardsAlfJANNICAMany Thanks for your thoughts and words of encouragement, I really respect your opinions. I do have a confession though, I really like the first version, yes I know it's over saturated and looks like something a child might have coloured in with a crayon, but maybe it's the child in me that it appeals to. Not to everyones taste, I know, but hey! it wouldn't be any fun at all if we all liked exactly the same things. Thanks again Jannica.All my best to you and your famillyWarm RegardsAlfHARRYMany thanks for getting back to me on this one, I agree it is more natural, but theres something about the "in your face" version : - ) that I really like, I know it's quite surreal, but thats what I think is appealing, to me at least, though I'm fairly sure I'm in a minority. As for the ratings, well ...after one of my friends decided to leave PN due in most part to the "anon 3's" and the rating system in general, and another of my friends was on the point of doing the same, I decided to opt out of the rating system altogether, and submit for "critique only" In truth the most valuable aspect of PN for me is the great feedback and advice thats available from people like yourself, where as a rating is just a number, and a number can't really tell you anything especially when the numbers in question are subject to abuse, or at the very least misuse. Thanks again Harry your comments have proved most helpful.Kind RegardsAlf Link to comment
llgarcia 1 Posted May 4, 2010 I like very much the contrasting color of the first boat in the scene. The dramatic sky and the rest of the image blend well together in this beautiful composition. Best regards, Alf Link to comment
morophaenixmau 22 Posted May 4, 2010 Very artistic and very well done:...I love it a lot! Link to comment
alfbailey 3 Posted May 4, 2010 LESTERMany thanks for your visit and very kind comments, I really appreciate it.Kind RegardsAlfMAURIZIOI am really pleased that you like it, thank you!Kind Regards ]Alf Link to comment
vancouverphotographer 1 Posted May 6, 2010 This is really well done - from the interesting composition to the great "look". Link to comment
vickifrance 0 Posted May 7, 2010 I agree this is well done and finely cooked at that. Link to comment
alfbailey 3 Posted May 7, 2010 SIDSELMany thanks for your kind comments and thoughts, I'm really pleased you liked it.RegardsAlfELENAThank you, I appreciate you kind commentsKind RegardsAlfDALEI appreciate your thoughts and imput, many thanksCheers mateAlfVICKII really appreciate your comments and imput Thank youRegardsAlf Link to comment
ndj 0 Posted May 15, 2010 Excellent work on this version Alf! I prefer the more natural tones in this one. I really like your composition, the beautiful tones in the boats, and the striking yet subtle sky. Superb work my friend!All the best,Neil Link to comment
joseph_eiche 1 Posted May 30, 2012 You see this is why I enjoy glancing through your portfolio because I always find something new that I haven't seen before that I like. The contrast that you have created between the boats and the remainder of the environment is quite interesting. The texture that the rocks create and the contrast with the smooth water is a nice complement. I enjoy looking at this. Link to comment
alfbailey 3 Posted May 31, 2012 Humble Apologies for my very late response , somehow I must have missed this one. Thank you for your kind comments.Best RegardsAlf JOEAs you may have guessed by the previous comments there were two versions of this, one was a very obvious HDR whilst this one, which was slightly more subtle. I think I may have removed the other version, which on reflection is a shame because it was a good comparison. I don't remove many images, they serve to remind me of all the mistakes I've made, as well as some of the progress I've made. I'm sure that I used a normal exposure as a layer for the sky as well. Many thanks for your thoughts and comments Joe, and its very gratifying to read that you find my portfolio interesting.Best RegardsAlf Link to comment
alfbailey 3 Posted August 8, 2012 Many Thanks for your interest and kind words, much appreciated!Best RegardsAlf Link to comment
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