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Andrew, I enjoy the darkness all around, Love the black! It's a much stronger feel ! Nice work! Regards, Doug.

Cheers Andrew!

 

PDE

I like this very much - you placed her just right by centering the nose from left to right. I get the feeling she is about to speak and say something important. Since I am not a fan of square format images I might suggest you crop evenly off both sides to make it more of a vertical rectangle. I would also be tempted to retouch one of the highlights out of each eye and perhaps increase the diameter of the remaining one.

 

You have used the dark here very well with the faint texture of the coat just recognizable. The tonality works very well.

 

Regards,

 

Jerry

Jerry,

 

thank you very much for your detail critique. You have some good points there.

good job here. like the light, expression and framing.

Sometimes but not here.

Just nice, her expression is priceless. Don't change a thing

 

 

 

 

The model , pose , lighting and conversion are spot on . I like the way her mouth is open , it's almost as if you caught her mid sentence . The black on black showing just enough detail is perfect .

Very interesting expression, darkness and expression make this picture to be very attractive. Really, great job.

I wrote above "sometimes but not here". I really like the photo. I suspect that my comment was in response to a critisim above that was later deleted. Sounds like my orphaned comment is bashing the photo which it was not. I had to explain.

Meir,

 

Your original comment was just fine. It was in response to my question “Is too much black too much?”

 

shows how things out of context take on a complete different meaning.

Beautiful portrait and model!

Cheers,Jim