robertbrown 1 Posted July 16, 2005 Attempt from my second day of street shooting--constructive critiques appreciated. Link to comment
jeremy freeland 0 Posted July 17, 2005 Robert: I'm only going to say this because I'm 100% guilty of this myself. I think this would stronger if the faces were more evident. The half turned face of the guy in shades isn't quite enough to hold my interest, and there's little sense of tension in what he's doing. Best, Jeremy Link to comment
robertbrown 1 Posted July 18, 2005 Jeremy, I think your critique is quite right--and the picture would be much better if his face was turned. Thanks . . . I'll keep this in mind as I attempt more of these. Link to comment
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