Portrait

Comment please.

Looking away from the camera with such a stern face doesn't do this lady justice. I'd rethink this setup and shoot again.

I like the lighting. well

Of course I too love lighting/depth/intesity, creating such unique atmosphere!

wow! nice model and very well done work ! sucsess and my best regards !7/6

So subtle, so sexy, so perfect...7/7!

Perfect expression, glorious light. Hair is beautiful, but might need just a touch of the styling brush.

Wow! As is it is a powerful shot! But cropped just below the hairline on the forehead, puts your photo in another league.....What an amazing expression she has on her face, and her breasts are works of art by themselves! Great lighting in your work......

Jarda, I would have liked to have seen a little light directed to the left of your model by means of a warming reflector above her head (there seems to be a reliance on a single low level light source to her right).

 

Further, the difference in light incident on her right eye is too strong compared to that of her left. Maybe consider dodging her left eye to bring out that faint glint I see in part of her iris. Perhaps burn the highlight a little in her right eye too so as to gain some balance.

 

Apart from those negative observations, I rather like her stern, cold expression and untypical gaze away from the lens. I also like her rough and ready take me as you see me rusticated hair style, which complements her expression and the apparent mix of contrasty, warm sepia like subtle tones.

 

Her striking nipples and their surrounding pimples look amazingly three dimensional, tactile like they could be tugged from the screen.

 

This composition makes a change from the usual soft and pleasant girly style I have seen posted here. It gives the impression of a someone who could be possessed by supernatural forces akin to Carrie. Which so happens to be one of my 1970s horror hall of fame movies.

 

Be careful, she might - if she has not done so already - send pots, pans, knives and other inanimate objects flying toward you. She might even crack your lens the next time she stares at it. :)

 

7/7...DAvid