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Your comments/criticisms are solicited. Thanks for looking!

i should have not used the fan since it was a wimpy little thing. also, i will make sure the model always shows up with either no or pleasing nail polish. sorry about that folks!

seems a bit flat, and she's either got large hands, or u used to wide a lens coz it seems a little out of proportion with her head. maybe dont crop so tightly so the whisps of hair are in frame, and at least some of her forearm

david - thanks for taking the time to offer comments. this was taken at 40mm on a 1.6x crop camera, so i would have hoped WA disortion wouldn't have come into play here. also, she does have a small head. i will remember your comments about the hair, framing, and limbs next time! thanks.

 

- asim

Hey Asim. I know I'm not your ideal critic due to my lack of experience, but I thought I'd offer up my humble opinion. I like her nail polish. I think it adds to her character, tells me more about her as a person than I would have known otherwise. To me, if she had perfectly manicured nails (painted or natural) the photo would have been much less interesting. Sorry if it wasn't what you were going for, but I don't think it turned out badly.