carolina Carolina

What could I have done better? Any critique welcome.

First I want to say-nicely done. I love the light filtering throught the hat. The model's expression is good and her lips parted just perfectly. The only thing I think could be better is that her left eye being partially obscured is distracting. I think if she were turned very slightly toward the camera so that you can see a catchlight in her left eye, it would improve the shot. Beautiful. 6/6

Well done. Like the use of the flash fill. Great color tones and great eye contact with the camera.

Great shot. Leave it as it is, well done.

 

Kind regards

I really like this shot. Excellent work!